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After a long hiatus, I've decided to open up 2 commission slots. The pricing structure is as follows:

 $50 - Story with single tickle scene; 1-2 ticklees, up to 5 ticklers
+$10 - Each additional tickle scene
+$ 5 - For 1 additional ticklee or 2 extra ticklers (in the whole story)
+$ 5 - Difficult character (tickled female, over 16 years old; I have trouble getting into the mind of such a ticklee)
+$ 5 - Added length beyond 4800 characters/8 pages
+$ 5 - Research required to use a previously-existing character/setting that I don't already know

In most cases, I ask for half up front, and half on final approval of the story.

As before, prices are negotiable, and no sexual/fetish content allowed.

I do not feel comfortable writing about real people unless I have that person's permission, so stories about actual actors/singers/stars/etc. are not possible without said person's direct permission. I reserve the right to refuse commissions if I don't feel I can write the specific material asked.
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Jomoko 3


By Dorain



This story involves a minor being tickled. If this concept offends you, or is illegal where you live, then proceed no further. This tale contains absolutely no sex or erotic themes. If that is what you are looking for, you can make money and improve your health by drinking a can of motor oil.  2015 © Dorain.

Jimmy Fontana stepped off the stairs of the airbus, and waited for his dad to clear security. The eleven-year-old, black-haired lad felt a shiver of nervousness ripple up his spine. This was Talankwe City; the jewel of the South African Coast. The city had endured centuries of wars, famines, despots and the fury of Nature herself, but had survived. The sacred edifices were lovingly restored and nestled among the gleaming glass spires that made Talankwe City the bustling modern metropolis it was. Jimmy’s sky blue eyes were drawn to the silvery pyramid far to the East.

That’s where it was.

The boy bounced excitedly on the seat of the autocab as it bore them through the busy streets. Outside the window, a veritable carnival of people walked through the streets; the autocars deftly avoiding them and each other in a complex dance of colour and motion. The many cultures and traditions which came together in this ancient city presented an eclectic mix of styles and fashions, with people in togas walking with those in hijabs and modern Mesoamerican-garbed people passing others in simple jeans and t-shirts. No traditions were considered bizarre or offensive. Bare bellies and bare breasts were all welcomed with a smile, while bare feet were prized above all else.

Jimmy looked over at his father, James. The man wore a simple blue suit with an ornate white robe over it. The boy himself was also dressed in an ornate white robe, but he wore simple shorts, a tank top and sandals underneath. They had prepared themselves for the ceremony in the hotel before summoning a ride to the Grand Temple of Jomoko.

Arriving at the temple, Jimmy’s father opened the door of the autocab and helped his son out. The boy’s eyes widened as he looked up at the towering edifice before him. The basic temple itself was made of stone blocks, polished white by the Attendees of Jomoko, but it was accented with stained glass strips running from the top to the bottom of the building, interspersed with solar panels. The temple was entirely energy self-sufficient. Those solar panels are what gave the temple its silver shine. They didn't go through the huge double doors in the front of the temple, but followed others through a smaller entrance to the right of it which disappointed the boy.  He was expecting those doors to open on a pair of giant lions and a verdant garden filled with exotic animals.

They entered a foyer lit from square-cut ceiling windows which filtered down through a magnificent inscribed lens, suspended horizontally from a chandelier lattice.  But instead of concentrating the light as a normal lens would, this one scattered it throughout, illuminating other latticed, glass sculptures and giving the entryway a look of angelic illumination.  The foyer was supported by columns with Greek bas reliefs carved into the white stone, and overstuffed chairs around what looked like a dance floor, all sitting on a circular rug of tan with dark brown purls and curves across its face.  The chair backs all had the emblem and script, and it was the central feature in the center of the dance floor.  Jimmy gawped at the display, speechless at the sheer beauty of it all.

Jimmy looked at the stained glass panel closest to him. It portrayed a historical scene; two young boys tied down on altars as Attendees approached them. The glass etched boys had happy faces. Jimmy swallowed nervously himself. That was going to be him in just a few minutes.

At the end of the foyer, his father led him up a small staircase, down a hallway lined with white-gold curtains and across similar sand-and-brown patterned marble floor until they reached a door.  The inside of the temple was lit by recessed lighting in soft pastel shades. The sounds of soft, distant laughter echoed through the ancient halls; for laughter was the very reason for the existence of this temple.

The sanctuary was massive; at least ten stories tall. It took up most of the space in the huge edifice. Padded seats radiated out from a central circular stage like the five points of a star. Each seat had a small video screen in the back of it so that the people behind could get a close look at what was happening on stage. Four times a year, a massive celebration was held, with five youths restrained for tickle sacrifice. Ordinarily, the five were orphan acolytes who lived in the rectory adjacent to the temple, but certain civilian kids were permitted on special occasions. The sons and daughters of kings, business leaders, philanthropists and political figures had occupied padded altars for those quarterly sacrifices in the past.

Jimmy wasn’t so special, though, and the next mass sacrifice was many weeks away. He and his father passed through the sanctuary and into a side alcove. Beneath one of the many relief carvings of the Tickle Patron, Jomoko was a door that led to a private room. Inside the room was a metal frame on a dias. Next to that was a padded chair. The chair had controls on the arms that controlled the orientation of the frame. The chair was also flanked with two tables that held a plethora of ticklish items and devices to use upon the captive of the table. Some benches lined the wall; occasionally, a private sacrifice would have an audience of friends or family.  Jimmy caught a glimpse of a young girl, tired but smiling, being carried out of a room as she lay languidly in a middle-aged woman's arms.  The boy could imagine how she got so exhausted!

A priest of Jomoko stood inside the room, patiently awaiting the pair in an off-white, slightly pink raiment. His rich chocolate skin was a stark contrast to the relatively paler skin of Jimmy and his dad, although the pair were well tanned from life in their beach village.

“Welcome, pilgrims,” the priest said with a smile. “Your boy looks rather old,” he said to Jimmy’s dad. “Have you been to the temple before?”

“No, this is the first time we’ve ever been able to get into Talankwe, so this is Jimmy’s first sacrifice. He’s eleven.”

“Oh, well that means he’s eligible for Second Tier,” the priest said warmly.  “Do you think you can take Second Tier, young man?” the tall man said, crouching down next to Jimmy.

Jimmy repressed the urge to step behind his dad for protection at the thought of that unknown Second Tier, but he was no little kid to hide behind his father. He was a bold, adventurous boy who was ready to face anything… at least that’s what he told himself. Instead, he screwed up his courage and nodded yes.

The priest signaled forward two figures in the shadows. They were young boys, dressed in the hooded cloaks of Acolytes. The two seemed a little younger than Jimmy, with dark skin. They gave bright smiles to Jimmy as they reached to lift the robe off of his shoulders. He didn’t resist as the Acolytes pulled the tank top off over his head, and lead him over to an ornate metal frame. It was basically a rectangle, with strap loops on the top and bottom bars. The frame was held up at an angle by carved stone pillars. In the middle of the pillars was a large lens in the floor which glowed faintly with rose-coloured light.

The Acolytes had Jimmy step out of his sandals and up onto the dais where the metal frame was. They turned him around and lined up his slender ankles with the cuffs. They quickly secured the padded cuffs around the boy’s ankles. At that point, the rose-coloured light from the lens on the floor got brighter. The two robed lads pushed Jimmy backwards gently, and to the boy’s surprise, an invisible force held him comfortably. The Acolytes then climbed up on stools and secured Jimmy’s wrists to the top of the frame. It was a tensor field, created by complex electronic wave projectors along the edge of the frame.  These had been created as an industrial venture, but had quickly spread into many different fields including science and medicine.  And despite fantasy and science-fiction texts of old, they were no good for storage as their maintenance alone cost more than a standard wood or metal sheet.

Jimmy found himself stretched taut on the frame in just his brief shorts; reclined slightly backwards. There wasn’t undue stress on his wrists because the rose light somehow supported him. The Acolytes then bowed to Jimmy, and the priest, and stepped out of the room. He was alone with his father, and a room full of tickling tools.

A shiver of fearful anticipation passed through him as his father sat in the chair. His father began to work the controls, swerving the boy this way and that and even singing circus music as he twirled his son in loops to screw up his equilibrium. After several such games as the man familiarized himself with the controls — at one point, Jimmy giggled at being totally upside-down — his dad finally got the frame aligned as he wanted it. The stone columns had slid in an out of the floor, and across the dais with a very faint grinding noise, but they moved smoothly and efficiently. Soon, Jimmy’s midsection was flat next to his father.

“Are you uncomfortable?” his dad asked.

‘Nah, the light is holding me up,” Jimmy assured him.

“In that case…”

The man’s hands started wiggling all over the boy’s bare tummy. Jimmy yelped and tried to squirm, but between his cuffed limbs and the solid-yet-intangible nature of  the rose light, he could barely move anything. All he could do was wiggle his fingers and toes and toss his mane of glossy black hair from side to side.

This was obviously not the first time his father had tickled him. As adherents of the teachings of Jomoko, Jimmy had been tickled nearly every day by his parents since he was a toddler.  Saturday mornings were especially giggly, as tradition deigned that all boys and girls under the age of twelve enjoyed five minutes of tickle time, eight o'clock on Saturdays, as homage to the god of laughter. This was the first time he had been so restrained, though, and it made the teasing movements of his father’s fingers over his belly all the more agonizing. Sweet giggles poured from his lips, delighting his father's ears as the man teased around the flat, soft belly.  The man cooed like an affectionate daddy, spidering fingers down his son's middle before flickering back and forth up and down his ribs.  Jimmy cooed and giggled right back as James's fingers moved up to the smooth hollows of his armpits--at which point he squealed like a little girl.  Under his arms were one of his most ticklish spots!  On a scale of 1-10, they definitely were a ten!

Then James flattened his palms and smoothly rubbed his son's sides and belly, chasing away the phantom tickles and allowing the boy to relax once more.

"Looking forward to it, kiddo?" the man asked.  Jimmy nodded with a grin, ready to get his share of ticklish play.  Ever since the rituals had begun in his life, he had learned to love--not the tickling specifically, but--the playfulness and interaction with his father that the two shared.  With other ticklers, Jimmy had enjoyed everything from giggly pleasure to fear and alarm, depending on their skill set and level of caring. There had even been one girl who, when he was five, would tickle his feet to make him wet his pants... but she had been sent away.

"Dad... what's Phase Two?"

"Phase Two?  You mean that thing you agreed to just a little while ago?"

"Yeah," Jimmy felt self-conscious about his bravado now.

"You agreed to something without knowing what it was?"

Jimmy blushed & looked away, embarrassed by what now seemed foolish.

“Let’s find out now!” his dad said with a playfully wicked grin.

He pushed a button on the frame, and there was the faint sound of a chime outside the room. A few minutes later, four people entered the chamber; a man and a woman, a little girl about Jimmy’s age, and a little boy about eight years old. They were all dressed in the raiment’s of the temple. The adult woman carried a tray with an ornate bottle on it.

Jimmy watched, intrigued. He curled his bare toes nervously, sure that this was the promised “Phase Two”.

“Daaad...?” the boy said nervously as the two adults came to stand on either side of him.

The man hit a button on the pillar nearest to him, and Jimmy was suddenly in motion. The frame rotated him within the antigravity field until he was laying flat, face down. The two children took position at his feet.

“Ready?” asked his father as he took a position at Jimmy’s head and raised his hands into a spider-like pose.

“Um, well…”

“That’s a ‘Yes’!” his dad exclaimed as he started tickling the back of his son’s neck.

“YEEE!!” Jimmy cried as fifty fingers started tickling his bare body all over.

Tiny fingers crawled all over his soles and between his toes; and unlike most kids, these children really knew how to tickle well! They exploited every vulnerable part of his feet, from his arches, to the sides of his feet, between his toes and even on his ankles. Jimmy mewled and howled in laughter. The padded cuffs allowed for little movement, but Jimmy was squirming his feet around as best he could. That didn’t discourage the little Acolytes, though. They went at his soles and toes with gusto. When they wiggled their little fingers between his toes, Jimmy would treat them to a wild scream of laughter; that was his most ticklish spot!

Meanwhile, the man took control of Jimmy’s sides and flanks, squeezing them with expert skill, making the boy go berserk with laughter. The frame stretched the boy tautly, without hurting him, so his torso was all stretched out and vulnerable to everything this virtuoso of tickling intended to do to him.

The woman was equally occupied. She used her sharp nails to tickle the backs of the youngster’s knees and thighs. Jimmy had a hint of how ticklish he was in those spots during the times when his father would squeeze there during their playful tickle-wrestling bouts, but being helpless to block or squirm away made it a maddening sensation, and when she darted her fingers between his thighs, Jimmy did his very best to buck in his bonds. Hysterical laughter was pouring through his mouth as his father cruelly tickled his neck and ears.

Jimmy looked down across his body. All he could see was the sweat of exertion making his stomach and legs shine. He couldn’t see any of the actual tickling; it was out of his line of sight, and that drove him buggy. Not being able to see what was coming and to be able to brace himself for it made the whole ordeal even more agonizing.

There were no chronos in the room, so Jimmy had no idea how long they tickled him. It seemed like mere moments short of eternity when they finally stopped. Jimmy panted for a few seconds. The four temple employees picked up towels from a nearby cupboard and dried the sweat off of the captive eleven-year-old’s body, soothing phantom tickles as they did.

“Man, Phase Two was killer!” the boy exclaimed with a smile, relieved that it was over, and yet somehow craving more of their fingers on his helpless, exposed skin.

“Oh, that wasn’t Phase Two,” the woman said from somewhere above his body.

“That was just the warm-up,” the man said with a chuckle.

Jimmy’s mouth dropped open in shock as the five ticklers took turns pouring oil out of the ornate jar onto the boy’s heated skin. They began rubbing it all over his body, from his neck down to the tips of his toes. He giggled like a chipmunk when tiny fingers teased the oil between his small toes. He knew what his fate was now. He had been tickled with oil on his feet before, and it made him go batty, it was so ticklish.

Once his preadolescent body was covered completely with oil, the ticklers all returned to their tasks of tickling, now accomplishing twenty times the ticklish effect as their fingers and nails flashed and careened over his frictionless flesh. The tickling sensations were like a pressure that pumped up his legs, and from his belly to pour into his head. Jimmy was sure that his mouth stretched to twice his size to let out the desperate laughter that poured out of it.

The four attendants reveled in the sweetness and joy of Jimmy’s laughter; a premium offering to their laughing god, Jomoko. Jimmy’s dad had moved to his son’s bare armpits, pumping tickling sensations from those sensitive hollows into the helpless boy’s nervous system. The man slid his hands quickly over Jimmy’s sides, and even reached down to tweak and squeeze the boy’s taut belly. The woman kept up her devastation on the back and insides of his thighs, and the kids were going happily insane on Jimmy’s poor feet.

“They gave me Phase Two yesterday,” the little boy chirped over the sound of Jimmy’s hysteria. “They tickled me until I nearly peed!” he exclaimed with a tickle.

With that mention, Jimmy’s split attention was focused involuntarily on his bladder. He had drained the tank before he was tied up, but being reminded of it increased the intensity of his delighted anguish. He wasn’t going to lose control in front of all of these strangers; most certainly not in front of the little eleven-year-old girl! She was making it hard, though. She had taken to playing with his toes with one hand as she scribbled nonsense figures on his sole. The boy kept up his monologue of how bad being tickled like this was, doubling the intensity of the sensations.

Jimmy lost track of time ten minutes into the relentless tickling. He lost track of his body at fifteen minutes in. In his mind, he was just a vessel with maddening tickling sensations pouring into him as the struggled to laugh them away even as he overflowed. The ordeal stretched his endurance and tolerance to the point where he would do anything to stop the ravaging of his helpless body. And yet, the tickling continued.

“You can do it, buddy,” his father whispered into the boy’s ear even as he tickled it. “You’re going to make me proud today!”

An hour into Phase Two, a deep, resonate chortling was heard throughout the temple, a sign that Jomoko was pleased.

Jimmy’s tormentors stopped tickling him, each of them smiling at the boy. He was rotated to an upright position, and his former tickle torturers picked up towels to wipe the oil and sweat off of the boy’s limp body.

“A blessing from above!” the woman exclaimed proudly. “It’s been a year since Jomoko was inspired to bless a tickle sacrifice. You are a very special boy!”

“I’ve always known that, kiddo,” his father said as he gently but firmly soothed away the tickling remnants from his neck and ears.

Jimmy barked with laughter again when the towels went between his toes and in his armpits, but it was mild compared to the cacophony he had given just moments before. After he was released from his restraints, he collapsed into his father’s arms; totally enervated. As his father lifted him up into his arms, Jimmy smiled happily. The clarion sensation of wellbeing that followed a really vicious tickling had him in bliss.

As he was being carried out, he thought to ask, “If that’s Phase Two, what’s Phase Three?” He didn’t really expect there was anything more intense than that, and was half joking, but the man replied in a matter-of-fact voice.

“Oiled, head downward, with brushes and powered buffers.”

Jimmy was stunned that there actually was a Phase Three, and for a moment he had a waking nightmare of what he imagined being tickled like that would be like. He shivered at the thought.

“Heh. Don’t worry about that, kiddo,” his father said to him as he nuzzled the boy’s shoulder. “Not until you’re thirteen.”

"Is there a...?" the boy began.

"Yes," the man responded.  



END.

The Prankster’s Penance


By Dorain



This story involves a minor being tickled while restrained. If this concept offends you, or is illegal where you live, then proceed no further. This tale contains absolutely no sex or erotic themes. If that is what you are looking for, you can make money and improve your health by drinking a bottle of drain cleaner.  2015 © Dorain.


There was no doubt about it; Sean was the greatest prankster in the history of St. James’ Junior High, and he was only in grade seven. His prank on the captain of the football team was epic. It left the fourteen-year-old athlete covered in whip cream and feathers. Fortunately for Sean, Derek was good natured when he chased down the younger boy in school. He congratulated him for his prank, but told him to watch his back, because there were other pranksters in school.

That prank had been a month ago, and the blonde twelve-year-old had enjoyed the accolades of his fellow grade seven students, and even some of the older kids, too. In particular, Cooper Williams had been extremely open in his appreciation of Sean’s pranking skills, and even aided the boy with future pranks on teachers and students alike, Best of all, Sean had honed his skills to the point where no one could pin the pranks on him.

On the eve of a prank that left the Phys. Ed. Teacher on the gym floor with his shorts around his ankles and his polka-dot boxers visible for all to see, Sean and Cooper retreated to Cooper’s house.

“Did you see his face?” Sean laughed as he entered the house.

As per the Williams’ house rules, he kicked off his shoes and ran up the stairs in his stocking feet.

“Did you see his undies?” Cooper laughed back, following his friend as they entered his room.

Cooper’s AwesomeBox 8 sat on the floor, hooked up to the boy’s TV. Their favourite Marlo Brothers game was already plugged in and Sean plopped down on the floor and grabbed a controller. He took a moment to slip off his uniform tie and unbutton his blue shirt because Cooper’s room could get hot when they were in the heat of competitive play. His blue-grey uniform shorts were plenty cool, though.

As usual, the first thing Cooper did was to strip off his tie, long blue-grey pants and uniform shirt and change into a shorts and a black T-shirt with his favourite band’s logo on it. He plopped down next to Sean and pulled off his blue ankle socks before grabbing the other controller and joining Sean’s game.

The two played for a half an hour before Sean needed to take a break to relieve himself. As he came back, he noticed something in Cooper’s room that he hadn’t seen before. Some kind of split plank was attached to the foot of Cooper’s bed. The two halves of the plank were hinged, and a latch was screwed into the other side. There were two holes in the plank, overlapping the two halves of the plank. Sean walked over to the bed and looked at it curiously.

“What’s this?”

“It’s a set of stocks,” Cooper said, clicking pause on the game and looking up at the blonde.

“What are they for?” Sean asked, intrigued.

“It’s for restraining people. My big brother made them. He sometimes likes to lock me in them when he’s babysitting me so I don’t bug him,” Cooper said in dismissive voice, shrugging his shoulders. “I don’t usually mind. I can still play video games like that, and he lets me out before mom and dad get home.

“What’s it like being in them?” Sean inquired, feeling around the holes curiously.

The holes were padded with thick foam and covered with soft felt.

“Wanna try?” Cooper asked with a grin.

“Sure!”

He sat on the bed as Cooper opened the latch and opened up the top board.

“Put your ankles in the holes,” Cooper advised.

Sean complied and Cooper closed the top part of the stocks onto the slim blonde’s ankles, and closed the latch.

“How does it feel?”

“It’s weird,” Sean said, wiggling his socked feet and realizing there was no give whatsoever. He could barely rotate his feet from the ankles.

“You know, I bet I could come up with a great prank involving these,” Sean said with a grin.

At that moment, the door opened, and in walked Derek!

“Funny, that’s just what I was thinking,” Derek said as he proceeded to insert and close a padlock in the latch of the stocks.

“Derek! What are you doing here?” Sean asked, feeling a bit panicked.

“I live here. Didn’t Cooper tell you about his big brother?”

Sean was speechless. Derek went over and removed the trapped boy’s shirt before Sean could protest.

“I warned you that there were other pranksters at the school, Seany,” Derek said as he picked up a bathrobe belt from Cooper’s messy floor.

“Cooper!” Sean exclaimed as he looked at his friend with incredulity.

Cooper looked ashamed and lowered his head.

“Sorry, Sean. He was going to torture me if I didn’t lock you in the stocks for him,” Cooper murmured.

Sean gave a dirty look to his erstwhile friend, but in that moment, he realized that Derek had wrapped the rope around his left wrist several times and tied it tight.

“What are you doing?” he demanded, trying to pull his arm away from Derek, but the older boy easily overpowered him and pulled him down to a lying position on the bed. With minimal struggle, he managed to secure the blonde boy’s wrist to the side of Cooper’s headboard.

“I’m getting even, little prankster,” Derek said as he reached for Sean’s right hand.

Sean finally realized he was being rendered progressively helpless and darted his right arm around, but Derek finally caught it and soon it was secured to the other side of Cooper’s headboard. Sean was now stretched out on Cooper’s bed, shirtless and wearing just his shorts and blue ankle socks.

“What are you going to do to me?” Sean asked, trying to sound bold, but really he was very nervous.

Derek sat down at the foot of Cooper’s bed and looked at the soles of Sean’s feet.

“Just this,” he said, wiggling his fingers on Sean’s right arch.

The sensation shot up the boy’s leg, into his nervous system, and emerged as a giggling yelp before he could stop himself.

“As, good. You’re a real tenderfoot,” Derek said, cracking his knuckles. “This whole thing would have been kind of pointless if you weren’t ticklish.

“Cooper!!” Sean cried accusingly as his young brunette friend cowered on the far side of the room.

“Sorry, Sean! I’m just too ticklish! Derek promised to tickle my feet for hours straight if I didn’t help him get revenge on you!”

“If you hadn’t gotten curious about the stocks today, I was going to force you into them, little trickster,” Derek chuckled as he lightly played with Sean’s socked sole, making the blonde boy giggle helplessly.

“I thought I was going to pee myself in anxiety, waiting for the past week for you to notice the stocks!” Cooper said morosely.

“Calm down, Coop,” Derek said as he started lightly tickling both of Sean’s helpless feet. “This means I won’t need to get you for a whole week!”

“No, plee-hee-hees, Derek. I can’t take it!” Sean giggled.

“That’s too bad, Sean, because if you can’t take this then this is going to really kill you!”

With that, Derek started spidering his fingers firmly up and down Sean’s small arches. Sean squealed and broke into heavy laughter. He tried to escape the older boy’s fingers, but the foam in the stocks held his ankles securely. He was completely helpless. Derek continued his scribbling on the blonde youngster’s arches for several minutes, and then, much to Sean’s dread, he poked his fingers into the crevice underneath the boy’s toes, making Sean shriek and start laughing wildly.

“Na! Na! Na-ha-ha-ha-haaa! Pleeeez, no more!”

“Oh, much more and more! We have two hours before mom gets home, and I’m going to tickle you the entire time, little Seany!”

“Cooper!! He-he-he-help meeeee!” Sean laughed. His eyes were closed at the intensity of the tickling on his poor feet.

“Yeah, Coop,” Derek said. “Help out!”

Cooper sighed and walked up to the side of his bed. He looked down at his suffering friend and said, “Sorry, Sean. He’ll torture me all Saturday if I don’t.”

Sean wasn’t sure what Cooper meant, but suddenly his brunette friend’s fingers were scribbling on his flat belly. Sean screamed and started laughing hysterically. The tickling on his feet was driving him mad, but the tickling of his belly just seemed to enhance the unbearable signals jolting up his legs. He strained his arms, trying to pull them down to fight off Cooper’s hands, but they were secured firmly. There was nothing the young prankster could do but laugh and suffer.

A half hour passed with Sean suffering the ticklish torment of his feet and belly non-stop. Finally, Derek called for his brother to stop. He lifted his fingers off of Sean’s feet.

“Deep breaths, there, champ,” Derek said. “What comes next is going to be killer!”

“No! <gasp!> No more!” Sean begged.

“Did you know that I had to wear my stinky gym clothes for the rest of that day you pranked me, Sean me lad?” he commented, ending with a fake Scottish accent.

“I’m sorry, Derek. I won’t do it again! I promise,” Sean pleaded.

“Oh, now don’t do that, Sean. I like a good prank as much as anyone, and you’re a diabolical genius. I’m eager to see what you will do next!”

Sean looked at him, confused.

“Just know that if you disturb the bull, you get the horns! And speaking of stinky clothes…”

With that, Derek grabbed the edges of Sean’s ankle socks, and with one motion, whipped them off his feet. The twelve-year-old’s soles were bare and vulnerable to anything Derek wanted to do to them.

“NO! Please! Not barefoot!!” Sean pleaded.

Derek chuckled and looked at Sean’s bare feet. The tops of his feet were pale, suggesting that despite the tan on his arms and legs, he rarely took his shoes and socks off outside. His soles were light pink, and looked very soft. The teenager ran a finger up Sean’s right sole, getting a squeal from his captive, and confirming the soft, sensitive nature of the prankster’s soles.

“You’re gonna just love this, Seany,” Derek said as he reached under Cooper’s bed.

He pulled out a shoebox filled with brushes and other devices of ticklish devastation. He picked up a pair of soft shaving brushes and started swirling them against Sean’s soles. The stocks creaked as the captive boy lurched against the new and agonizing new tickling sensation on the bottoms of his feet.

“Oh, no, no, no! Please, not that! Hee-hee-hee-hee-hee-hee!” Sean laughed.

He clenched his feet, trying to protect himself from the feathery attack, but Derek just grabbed Sean’s big toe and held it back against the stocks. That stretched and straightened out the twelve-year-old’s sole, giving the teenager unrestricted access to a ticklish canvas of squirmy flesh.

Sean’s laughter jumped up an octave as Derek plied the shaving brush to the helpless captive’s right foot. The younger boy screamed and howled as the bristles of the brush invaded between his toes, tormenting seldom-touched and very ticklish skin. Sean’s laughter calmed a bit when the brush was moved down to polish his arch, but he was still laughing too hard to even beg for mercy. Much to his delight, Derek discovered that even Sean’s ankles were delightfully ticklish.

Sean suffered long under the domination of that brush, but there was no mercy to be had when Derek was done with it. Instead, he picked up a hairbrush with medium-stiff bristles. He grabbed Sean’s left big toe, stretched his arch taut and started lightly but quickly brushing the young prankster’s entire sole.

Sean screamed so shrilly that his voice broke. For the next ten minutes, the boy was enslaved to silent, hysterical laughter. It was like a thousand fingers all tickling his foot at once, and he simply could not stand it. He bucked and pulled, but the stocks were solid and his wrist bonds were tight, but still comfortable.

Delighted by Sean’s suffering, Derek continued tickling the boy’s sole and toes with the brush for twenty minutes, switching to his right foot halfway through. Sean was sweating and tears of laughter poured from the corners of his eyes. Sean had never been tickled before, and his debut to the experience was an excruciating one. He arched his back as the brush went up and down his tender arches again and again, until Derek felt he had fully paid back the preteen for the humiliation he had inflicted on him.

When the tickling stopped, Sean flopped back, relaxed on the bed, panting for breath.

“All done, big guy,” Derek said as he smiled down at Sean. “The next time you prank me, it will be twice as long, and I’ll use the toothbrushes.”

Sean couldn’t imagine what that would feel like, but if Derek had brought it up, it was bound to be agonizingly ticklish.

The teen removed the padlock from the stocks and opened them up, allowing Sean to pull his knees up to his chest, as if afraid the teenager was going to keep tickling him. When his arms were free, he got up off the bed, wobbled for a moment, and then rubbed his soles against the carpet of Cooper’s room to erase the phantom tickles that continued to possess his feet.

“Thanks, loads, Coop,” Sean said sourly.

Cooper frowned sadly.

“Sorry. My feet are super ticklish, and Derek has no mercy!”

“So I noticed,” Sean replied.

Derek looked down at the two preteens, and cocked his eyebrow quizzically.

“Now, we can’t have a good friendship break-up over a little payback!”

With that, he picked up his scrawny little brother, and plunked him on the bed.

“No, Derek! No, please! Not in front of Sean!” he begged as his feet were trapped in the stocks and the latch locked with the padlock.

Cooper begged as his arms were secured over his head and he was soon in the perilous position Sean just recently vacated.

“Have at him, little dude!” Derek said, indicating Cooper’s wiggling feet.



To be Continued.
Chapter 59: Disposal


When Joey came to, he found himself wrapped in a sheath of rebar. He flexed a bit, testing its strength, but unfortunately, that attracted the attention of the workmen who were busy bending the rebar to fit around his body.

“He’s awake!”

One of the men grabbed a gun from a nearby crate, and before Joey could react, he shot the boy in the head again. Darkness filled Joey’s world once more.

Somewhere in that darkness, he heard the sound of water slopping against something; perhaps a boat. He ried to open his eyes, but all he could see was inky darkness. Either his eyes wouldn’t open, or he was somewhere even his feline sight couldn’t see. Then, he felt a gentle touch on his face, and a resonate male voice whispered, “Return.”

This time when he came to, two things were immediately obvious to the young hero. One was that he was totally encased from the neck down in a huge block of cement. The block was wrapped with metal bands, and no matter how he struggled and flexed, he couldn’t move a muscle. The second thing was that he was on a boat.

“W-what’s going on?” he yelled above the roar of the sea wind.

The man in the blue who shot him the first time walked into his line of sight. He wore sunglasses, preventing Joey from seeing his eyes, but the boy had the odd sense that those eyes were cold and evil. The man radiated emotions of exhilaration and anticipation, though.

“The Spider ordered us to get rid of you. It may not help Sandrioni’s case, but if you’re not at the trial, his lawyer has a better chance of getting him off. Plus, it keeps you out of our hair, which is a bonus.”

Joey’s face grew more and more horrified as he realized what they intended.

“No! Please!” he begged, tears starting to form in his eyes. “I’m afraid of drowning! You don’t understand!”

When he was small, he once became upended in the tub and trapped with his face underwater as his mother was busy on the phone. As the water started to flow down his esophagus, Joey panicked. Thankfully, his father walked by the bathroom just then and rushed in to lift the toddler out of the tub. Ever since then, Joey had been afraid of dunking his head underwater, even briefly.

“You’re afraid?” the man said, a cruel smile lifting the corner of his mouth. “Even better! Well, look at that! We’re here,” he said as a crewman waved to him.

The man walked up close to Joey’s face, and lowered his glasses. His grey eyes were, indeed cruel and cold-looking.

“It’s 100 fathoms here, Guardian. That’s 3300 ft. deep. Are you ready for your swim?”

He waved his arm, and the pallet that the cement block rested on was lifted by a crane.

“Maybe it’s overkill, but that reinforced concrete and metal bands would take a miracle to break free from. You’re going to be on the bottom of the ocean forever, boy! No one will ever find you!”

He yelled above the sound of the crane’s engine. The block was swung out over the water.

Joey cried and begged. “No, please! I’ll go far away and never come back! Just don’t do this! Please!!”

The man appeared to consider for a moment, then shook his head.

“Nah, this is more fun. And totally gangster,” he said.

In that moment, the block was cut loose. It plunged into the water. The second before it hit, Joey took a deep breath. He knew he could hold his breath for a very long time as the Guardian, but he despaired because he knew it would never be long enough. The icy cold water was of little discomfort, but it rushed up his nose as the block rushed downward into the murky depths.

“Good riddance,” said the man in the blue suit, as he waved for the captain to turn the boat around and return to Centropolis Docks.

Joey was dead of drowning long before the massive block settled sideways on the ocean floor. Curious fish nibbled at the boy’s nose and ears as his hair swirled out like seaweed. There was no hope for the Guardian.



Wes Cross walked sadly back to his car from the Honeycutts’ door. When Joey’s guardian called 911 to say that the boy never arrived at school the next day, the lieutenant rushed to her home to try to soothe her fears. She was panicking over the possibility of her charge being kidnapped twice under her watch. She angrily demanded that the police do something immediately, and the detective calmly explained about how it took time to search for a missing child. Inside, though, he was extremely worried himself.

An examination of the Anderson residence showed that the boy’s coat, shoes and backpack were still in the house, and the door was still locked from the inside. To any ordinary detective, it would be a puzzling case, but Wes feared that he knew exactly what happened. Joey had gone out to play super hero, and something bad happened to him.

Wes looked at his watch; it was one o’clock in the afternoon. Joey might have gone missing any time between when he left school yesterday afternoon, and when the school called Ms. Honeycutt to see why the boy hadn’t shown up for classes. Considering how Joey traversed the city with enormous bounds, he realized that it would be nearly impossible to trace his steps, so he sadly placed the file on the seat of his car. Outside of an unexpected tip, he would likely never know what happened to the young hero.



Joey opened his eyes. The pressure of the water pushed uncomfortably on his eyes and eardrums. He had air in his lungs and he held onto it desperately. His cat vision slowly started resolving the features of the sea floor where his prison rested. He looked upward; there wasn’t even a hint of light indicating whether it was day or night. He struggled against his bonds, but it was just as futile as it was before he was dumped in the ocean. Far too soon, his lungs started burning for fresh air. Desperately he held his breath, but darkness encroached on the edges of his vision, and eventually, he passed out. Water flowed into his lungs again and he drowned once more.
Guardian Song, Chapter 59: Disposal
Joey is captured. What will happen to him now?
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  • Listening to: Trans-Siberian Orchestra
  • Reading: D&D 4.5 Dungeonmaster's Guide
  • Watching: The Simpsons
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  • Drinking: Coke Zero & OJ
After a long hiatus, I've decided to open up 2 commission slots. The pricing structure is as follows:

 $50 - Story with single tickle scene; 1-2 ticklees, up to 5 ticklers
+$10 - Each additional tickle scene
+$ 5 - For 1 additional ticklee or 2 extra ticklers (in the whole story)
+$ 5 - Difficult character (tickled female, over 16 years old; I have trouble getting into the mind of such a ticklee)
+$ 5 - Added length beyond 4800 characters/8 pages
+$ 5 - Research required to use a previously-existing character/setting that I don't already know

In most cases, I ask for half up front, and half on final approval of the story.

As before, prices are negotiable, and no sexual/fetish content allowed.

I do not feel comfortable writing about real people unless I have that person's permission, so stories about actual actors/singers/stars/etc. are not possible without said person's direct permission. I reserve the right to refuse commissions if I don't feel I can write the specific material asked.
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  • Reading: Peter and the Starcatchers
  • Watching: The Possession
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  • Eating: Cheese Omlette in a Mug
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FootTicklingPrincess Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can almost hear the sound of sweet helpless laughter when I visit your page, you are amazing!
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Thank-you very much
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Thank you for all the joy you've brought to fans of tickling soft cute bare feet over the years!
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a boy of 17 will be executed 
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Hey Dorain I think we might need a new Peter Pan tickle story starring the Levi Miller version from the new Pan movie =) He looks veeeeerry ticklish =D
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That very well may be :)
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happy birthday dormouse :3
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Thank-you. :)
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Happy birthday!^_^ you're fantastic:3
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